Fall (Back) in Love with Your Manuscript

with Paz Pardo

Falling back in love with your manuscript online fiction writing course

August 12, 2026
Length: 8 weeks
Open to AllText and Live Video

Zoom calls Thursdays from 8-10 PM Eastern.

Original price was: $545.00.Current price is: $465.00.

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Putting together a book-length manuscript—whether that’s writing a novel or assembling a collection of short stories—is a long and lonesome road, and many a writer finds themselves at a crossroads somewhere along the way: unable to find joy in the writing they’ve already done, tired of plodding towards a seemingly ever-receding goal, wondering if it would make more sense to simply turn off toward some shiny new idea.

This eight-week course is an antidote to the ennui that can come mid-project, helping you shake up your process, rediscover the flame that set you on this path in the first place, and find your way back toward finishing the manuscript you once felt called to write. Through readings and workshops, we will tackle every aspect of writing—from the micro (sentence structure, dialogue, and scenecraft) to the macro (chronology, point of view, and story structure).

Each week, you’ll be encouraged to think of your book in a new way, expanding your understanding of its possibilities. Through readings and writing exercises, we will focus on playfully engaging with the material you have and joyfully generating new work, freeing your imagination from any constraints you may have unconsciously placed on it.

During our Zoom meetings, we’ll discuss the craft tools we’re exploring, and find companionship on our creative journeys. In targeted weekly exercises based around your project, you’ll have the chance to interrogate the choices you’ve already made and reconsider what the work could be. I’ll give you written feedback on every assignment, and you’ll receive either in-class or online feedback from your classmates. By the end of the class, you’ll have assembled the tools you need to confidently walk around your book, fall back in love with it, and keep moving toward the finish.

 Who This Course is For

For writers working to complete or revise a book-length manuscript. Whether it’s your first novel or eighth collection, writers of all levels are welcome.

Direction and Feedback

Every weekly assignment will receive written feedback from the instructor, and either in-class or written feedback from fellow students.

Zoom Schedule

We will meet each week on Zoom on Thursdays from 8:00-10:00 PM Eastern.

Learning Goals & Writing Goals

Learning Goals

  • Discover how to analyze your choices through play, opening new possibilities for future writing.
  • Learn to shift perspectives to see your work more clearly
  • Understand how craft choices affect the reading and writing experience

Writing Goals

  • Develop a writing practice that will allow you to joyfully continue work on your project
  • Test out new styles and structures for your book
  • Explore new approaches for revision

Weekly Syllabus

Week 1: Introduction

This week, we’ll introduce ourselves and our projects to each other. You’ll write a bird’s-eye view outline of your work as it stands, a snapshot of where you are at the beginning of the course.

 Week 2: Time

How does a story change if you tell it backwards? If you start in the middle? This week, we’ll reimagine our stories with different chronologies: you’ll write condensed outlines imagining your narrative three ways.

Week 3: Suspense, Surprise, and Reveals

How do you feed information to your reader? What are you hinting at and making them wait for, and what are you hiding to blindside them with? This week, you’ll reimagine a reveal you’ve already planned using different techniques to stretch your craft muscles.

Week 4: Dialogue      

What do your characters say to each other? What is implied, and what is hidden? What makes it onto the page directly, and what is just reported? This week, you’ll write a scene between two characters two ways: entirely in dialogue and entirely reported.

Week 5: Voice

What is the voice of a story? How does it teach the reader to read it? What would happen if it changed? This week, you’ll reimagine the voice of your narration.

Week 6: Rhythm

How does sentence structure build the reader’s experience of prose? What happens when it shifts? This week, you’ll set out a rhythmic goal and write a scene to meet it.

Week 7: Point of View

What happens when you think through your story from another place? What happens if another character tells it? This week, you’ll write a scene switching up the point of view.

Week 8: First, Second, Third

How does which person you write from shape the story you’re creating? This week, you’ll try writing from a new person, seeing what panoramas it opens up and which it shuts down.


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Student Feedback for Paz Pardo:

This course exceeded the expectation I gleaned from the course description. It revived my interest in my novel in progress and encouraged me to look at the work and address my concerns in a fresh way. Paz was an excellent instructor, critic, and advocate. Her responses were timely and her feedback was succinct . She demonstrated an ability to see where I was going and either gave me a friendly push in that direction or pointed out an alternative route. She created a warm and giving environment. Doug Gray
 
Paz is an outstanding teacher! She is extremely generous with her time, providing a tremendous amount of valuable feedback. She is encouraging and affirming while suggesting ways to improve the work. Diane Carmony
 
I had an excellent experience in this course — without Paz’s insightful encouragement I think I would have lost momentum on this project but because I took the course I believe I will be able to get through to completing the novel! Catherine George
 
Paz has provided me with some of the best feedback I’ve ever received on my writing. Even in early stages of a project she is able to identify key unanswered questions that inspired me and drove me forward in my subsequent drafts. Her comments are focused, identifying the most important areas to address, instead of providing a laundry list of comments. Finally, Paz has this gift of offering both love and encouragement with her direct, honest and insightful feedback. Working with her is always rigorous, exhilarating and full of joy. George Bazett
 
This course was the perfect environment to rewrite my novel! Paz’s feedback has been eye opening! She helped me look at my manuscript in a whole new way, which helped me completely rewrite it. I’m so proud of the manuscript I created with her specific feedback. Paz gave specific feedback about the manuscript and generalized feedback to hone my craft and write better. Liz Leedy
 
Paz’s ability to read and thoughtfully analyze such a large chunk of my novel with such surprising detail and insight is nothing short of remarkable. Her feedback addressed the key components of my story and revealed layers of nuance I hadn’t considered, all while encouraging me to elevate my work. Paz’s guidance has fundamentally shaped the way I write, particularly in crafting interiority and weaving small, meaningful details that ease and enrich the reader’s experience. Despite her thorough approach, I never once felt judged—only encouraged to meet my full potential. Paz fosters a constructive and uplifting environment, making it a pleasure to learn and grow as a writer. This class has been a worthwhile investment! Antigone Blackwell
 
Paz is a very thoughtful and considerate teacher. One of the things that appealed to me about this course was her offer to read a large section of my work-in-progress. Having someone look through what I had so far and tell me how I could improve on it was so important to me at this juncture of my journey. I highly recommend her course. Michelle Baltazar

August 12, 2026
Length: 8 weeks
Open to AllText and Live Video

Zoom calls Thursdays from 8-10 PM Eastern.

Original price was: $545.00.Current price is: $465.00.

Click the Enroll Now button below, enter your details on the Checkout page,
and reserve your spot in the course.

Original price was: $545.00.Current price is: $465.00.Enroll Now

Reserve your spot and secure early bird pricing

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About

Paz Pardo’s writing has been featured in The New York Times Modern Love column, LitHubThe Brooklyn Review, The I Scream Social Anthology: Volume 1, and Howlround Theater Commons, among other venues. Her novel The Shamshine Blind was selected as one of the best scifi/fantasy novels of 2023 by Library Journal and one of the best debuts by Crimereads. She received her MFA from the Michener Center for Writers in 2018.