The Poet’s Path

The desire to express oneself through poetry begins in the natural need to be seen and heard. Beyond that, it’s articulating this existence – the sense of wonder or sacred view, the one mortal taste of pleasure and pain. It’s the bittersweet human quality of the heart, whether broken open, or once-opened, or waiting to open.

Allen Ginsberg taught Marc Olmsted how to write poetry and Marc is passing on what he learned. The Poet’s Path is a good introduction to Ginsberg, Marc, and what and how they teach.

This is a class for anyone who has to urge to write poetry but isn’t quite sure just how to go about it, for those already writing poetry who would like to grow in their practice, and for experienced poets looking for a new vision and new tools.

Week One: WHAT IS A POEM?

Andy Warhol said “art is anything you can get away with.” The same could easily be said of poetry.

There are too many forms of poetry and contradictory arguments to present them all here. Song lyrics generally rhyme, modern poetry generally does not. Do we want to make sense, and does it matter? Whom are we speaking to, do we want to communicate? Journaling into poetry is legitimate. There are no accidents.

Assignment: Submit what you think of as a poem, either new or something you’ve already written.

Week Two: FIRST THOUGHT, BEST THOUGHT

“First Thought, Best Thought” – Chögyam Trungpa in conversation with Allen Ginsberg

“First thought is best in Art, second in other matters.” –William Blake

“If you don’t stick with what you first thought, and to the words the thoughts brought, what’s the sense of bothering with it anyway, what’s the sense of foisting your little lies on others?” – Jack Kerouac

Assignment: Watch an old movie on TV, jot down what you see without much thought. Record snippets of dialog and a couple of striking images. Type it up and submit.

Week Three: MIND IS SHAPELY, ART IS SHAPELY

“Notice what you notice.” – Allen Ginsberg

“Mind is shapely, art is shapely.” – Jack Kerouac

“My writing is a picture of the mind moving.” – Philip Whalen

Assignment: Try Assignment #2 again. Has it changed with feedback and your new understanding?

Week Four: NO IDEAS BUT IN THINGS

“No ideas but in things” – W.C. Williams

“The natural object is always the adequate symbol” – Ezra Pound

“Observe what’s vivid.” – Allen Ginsberg

“Labor well the minute particulars, take care of the little ones.
He who would do good for another must do it in minute particulars.
General Good is the plea of the Scoundrel Hypocrite and Flatterer
For Art & Science cannot exist but in minutely organized particulars.” – William Blake

“Don’t think of words when you stop but to see the picture better.” – Jack Kerouac

Assignment: Try sitting in a park or mall, attention to breath, eyes open as described in lecture. Now describe what you see and hear as you did with the TV.

Week Five: SURPRISE MIND

“Surprise mind” – Allen Ginsberg

“Magic is the total delight (appreciation) of chance.” – Chögyam Trungpa

Tendrel – Tibetan for “auspicious coincidence”

“There are no accidents” – Carl Jung

Assignment: Sometimes you mean to write one thing and you write another, like “cell phone” comes out as “self phone.” Sometimes they come from handwriting, sometimes they’re typos in typing. Did any accidents occur in the last few weeks that you might reconsider using now? Did you write something down that you didn’t understand at the time? Submit your favorite accidents, either typos or surreal combinations you didn’t intend. Fragments and single lines are fine.

Week Six: TO COMPOSE IS TO CONDENSE

dichtung=condensare – Basil Bunting, fumbling about with a German-Italian dictionary, found this idea : the German for “poem” was found to be the equivalent of the Italian for “to condense,” it became a slogan of Ezra Pound

“Maximum information, minimum number of syllables.” — Allen Ginsberg

Assignment: With this in mind, again try sitting somewhere and observing, like a coffee house window that looks out on the street.

Week Seven: REVISION

“…attempting to record without hesitation, cutting where the mind gets stiff.” – Marc Olmsted

“Tailoring” – Gregory Corso

Assignment: Are there things you wrote before this class that might be condensed?

Week Eight: SENDING IT OUT

“Candor.” – Walt Whitman

“Candor ends paranoia.” – Allen Ginsberg

“…poetry can stand out as the one beacon of sanity: a beacon of individual clarity, and lucidity in every direction–whether on the Internet or in coffee houses or university forums or classrooms. Poetry, along with its old companion, music, becomes one mean of communication that is not controlled by the establishment.” – Ginsberg interview by Gloria G. Brame for ELF, Summer 1996

Optional assignment: We fulfill our efforts to communicate by sending out our manuscripts.

Student Feedback for Instructor Marc Olmsted

One of my pieces was published today for poetry month in Sensitive Skin Magazine. Marc has been a wonderful teacher. I want to thank you for the Writers.com program. It is still the best out there. Kelly Cowan

The assignments were wonderful - just the thing to shake me out of habitual ways of thinking and writing and inject my work with new energy and inspiration. Marc was excellent – very encouraging. Just the right amount of positive feedback and helpful suggestions for improvement. Moira Logan

Marc's lectures are insightful and inspiring, and they clearly urge the student to the jumping-off point: writing poems. His mindful readings are spot-on, and he always includes sensitive suggestions for possible improvement. Marc's insightful comments reminded me of elements of my writing that I'd let slip over the years, and for that I'm grateful and newly inspired. He also pointed us to an online publisher to submit our work. Chris Parmentier

Marc enters the classroom like a wonderful guru full of insightful comments, positive encouragement and sense of humor. He is the Beat Zen master of poetry instruction. Peter Bauman

Marc's direct feedback was positive, made sense, and was very helpful. He created a safe space with a nice balance of freedom and structure. The whole group was excellent and fun to spend four weeks getting to know. I finished the course motivated and inspired. Thanks Marc! Lori McDonald

In the beginning I was a bit overwhelmed but I thought [Marc's] attentiveness and willingness to understand and really go the extra mile with each student was quite extraordinary. I felt he took an interest in each student in a very profound way and made an effort to come to grips with the strengths and weaknesses of each one in a way that was encouraging, supportive, and honest. I think Marc Olmstead is an excellent mentor with a rare ability to create a space for building on and expanding individual consciousness and expression. Melody Emmett

I am happily going back to Marc's class from time to time as long as he offers them - even if the assignment material is the same. Marc is my muse. Miho Kinnas

I'd like to say that Marc really made me feel like I could write poetry, something I never would have imagined I had the talent to do. And because of this realization I feel like I found the 'right' form of writing, genre?, that I am comfortable in and it makes me want to keep writing. That's a great thing for a teacher to do, I think! Jeannie Pasch

I love writers.com. Marc's lectures were very detailed and informative and I enjoyed them. His assignments were very specific. I learned to pay attention to detail in my writing and also grounding my writing, which is really what the class was all about I think. I learned to be patient when writing and also how to revise, especially when to stop. Marc's lessons and mentoring have translated to my other writing as well. I'm not sure how he did it (maybe it was magic), but I have produced so many quality poems during those 10 weeks that I have material to send off for quite a while. I have also been published twice already, and was published within three weeks from my very first submission. That was the other thing I liked about Marc's class, we sent our work out. He showed us how to do it, and that was the push that I needed. I took my first class in September and then Marc's, it has made all the difference in my life. So Thank You to all of you. I feel that writers.com really does care about their students. Thanks. Susan Furst

When I sat down today to write I realized that what I had learned in Marc's "path poets path" had really made a difference in my approach to poetry and to my perception of what is "correct". I then reread Marc's lectures. I think part of what he was saying is that don't be confined by what I see others do and to the form of the past, Just be true to my own voice. The rest will follow. Good advice. Mike Karpinski

The lessons were excellent, as were the writing prompts each week. I would definitely recommend this class to anyone even thinking about writing poetry. Jill Thompson

Marc Olmsted was the best! I love his style of writing and I learned so much in the 8 weeks with him. Kathy Joseph

I wanted to let you know that I just wrapped "The Poet's Path" class with Marc Olmstead. It was an amazing experience! I had no idea to expect from a poetry class, but it was a truly rich experience. Marc provided us with simple tools and deep reflections along the way; it was almost like following a trail of breadcrumbs and before we knew it, we arrived at a place where we were creating/recognizing poetry. I hope to take a follow up class with Marc in the near future. Even though I do not fancy myself a poet, I think the experience of the class has added a great dimension to my every day writing. Marc is an inspiration. Arnie Doyle

Marc Olmsted's wonderful Poet's Path takes aspiring poets from inspiration to submission. Along the way, he explores the nature and purpose of poetry, and he offers a variety of techniques for revising, condensing, and collaborating. Marc treats his students like colleagues and carefully considers every line of every piece submitted in class. He helped me find the heart of several poems. I frequently recommend your classes to friends and colleagues, and I plan to return to Writers.com. Ashley Walker

I thought the class content/ lessons and assignments were great. They were educational, fun to do, and easy to manage each week. The lectures were excellent. I keep going back to them for insight. ...Marc was just great. He replied to everyone's assignment- and even followed up regarding questions. He knows his stuff! I recommend Marc's class to friends. Every time I talk about the class I light up with a smile. Writers.com is an excellent resource for anyone wanting to practice the art of writing. Top notch educators, lectures, assignments, and top notch class mates. I will continue to take these university level writing classes Writers.com offers. Laura Barrick

Marc is an amazing teacher. I loved the way he would edit our work to just those few necessary words. He encouraged everyone to keep writing even when we didn't have time or thought we didn't have much to say... I'm actually going to re-take this class because there was so much there and I want to keep the momentum going. It's not just about the writing either. I'm feeling a little shy about this but the class actually changed me...opened up something in me that wasn't open before... Getting stuff published on the poetry superhighway was a neat thing. Cyndry Krey

Prior to Marc's class I had never written any type of poetry and did not know what to expect. Because of my inexperience, the first few poems that I submitted were awful because I was trying to be profound and write like I thought poetry should be written. However, Marc was very patient and did an excellent job of encouraging me to just write about everyday life experiences in the moment. Once I started writing about the moment and stopped trying to be profound, I started looking forward to the writing assignments. By the end of the class I was able to take some of my writing and form them into poems that were meaningful to me. This growth felt huge. This growth was due to Marc's patience and guidance. I would encourage others to take his class. Bruce Pickens

Marc takes an objectivist approach to his lectures which are delicately draped in poetic lineage, finally picked quotes and excerpts, and wild the out-of-the-box assignments. After finishing both Writing Kerouac/Sitting Buddha and Mind Breaths, I can candidly say that the experience has transformed my love and play for poetry but also has reprogrammed (in a good way) the way I look at literature and life. My mind was stretched in different ways by Marc's clear comments [and] also through lively in-class discussions. It is the perfect class for any poet or student looking to refine their knowledge... I could not be more pleased. It was just an added bonus to have a few poems published at the end of the course. Chaz Southard

I just wanted to write an email to express my appreciation to writers.com. I just completed Marc Olmsted's "Write like Kerouac, Sit like Buddha"- it was an inspiring and productive 10 weeks. Olmsted served as a well of information and insight, sharing his personal experiences as a friend and student of Ginsberg, a student of buddhism and a practtitioner of spontaneous poetics! The weekly lectures and lessons were lucid, instructive and often, fun! His feedback on work submitted by the class always focused on finding the poem- sometimes through major editing suggestions- he seemed to nail it every time! Thanks! Genevieve Legacy

I think most of us were pretty clear on this with Marc - Stunningly good. In partcular, the lectures gave me content I could never have gotten elsewhere. I told everybody here about it. The assignments ... allowed us to have wide ranging discussions and get great feedback from Marc. ... Marc is a great poet and a great instructor. I have taken writing courses (though not online) and have gven them up because the one really good teacher I ever found passed away. The rest however never even came close to Marc. Very VERY good. I will definitly sign up for the January course with Marc...I appreciate what you have done here. Quality at a decent price. Thanks. David Tilley

I LOVED this class. I found my voice and the best way to express it. Marc's lectures were inspiring, thought provoking, and sometimes a kick in the rear. His direction and guidance fabulous. I can't wait to take his next class!! I've actually submitted work - and am now awaiting the responses! Peggy Bell

I was very happy with the class content. I mainly took the class for a "jumpstart", and the assignments were perfect in terms of the progression and the feedback... Marc is an excellent teacher... I've been "out of the loop" with writing for quite a while, and I took this class in order to re-ignite the spark. Although I'm absolutely certain that he could have (severely!) criticized my poems, Marc was nothing but encouraging, helpful, and positive. I really appreciated his thoughts and feedback! I would definitely be interested in taking another one of his classes if he were to teach again. Marisa Borders

I took the course with the intention of bettering my understanding of the Beat generation, their aesthetic, the way in which they practiced writing. The class did exactly this. Marc has an intimate understanding of the Beats and practices their principles in his own writing. In addition, his last lecture made the daunting task of sending off material to likely publishers easy--a nice bonus for me! Lisa McCool-Grime

Marc is a very supportive instructor. I particularly liked that he responded to our writing regularly and promptly. It helped keep me connected. I very much liked the readings and the lessons that came from them. They helped me see a new way of looking at writing poetry in general and at my work in particular. The class helped free me of some of the roadblocks I had built up unawares. I plan to take Marc's other poetry class some time in the near future.   Cheri Ause

The class content was fantastic and the teacher rocks. One of the best I have ever had. Again five stars for Marc, Word Flashes, Writers.com etc.!!!!!!   Jana Mackin

Marc was funny, engaging, and very positive! I really enjoyed the content . The exercises got me to focus more, sketch more, loosen my grasp. I already have told others about your classes and have taken other classes! I love writers.com. So supportive, so interesting, such great teachers. Thanks! Katherine Arnup

In Marc Olmsted's, Beginner Poetry, the lessons and assignments were direct, fun and open ended, providing both structure and freedom. As a beginner I felt safe(enough) to take chances, to express myself and to be playful! I have never been able to express myself comfortably in writing so this is new and I don't think another teacher or course would put me where I am right now. I plan to take your next course, Marc. You have been specific, inspiring, kind and generous in your lectures and feedback. My DEEPEST gratitude. Denise Sklar

I LOVED being in class with Marc Olmsted again! In fact the week class ended, I submitted three poems to Rick Lupert's Poetry Superhighway and two of them were published! I'm the Poet of Week for the week of January 17-23, 2011! This is my 6th or 7th class with Writers.com - and yes, I'll be taking another class soon. Peggy Nolan

I thoroughly enjoyed and appreciated the class content, progression through assignments and Marc's comments. He did a fantastic job with the lectures and the final lecture, "send it out" was as good of an argument for the purpose of art eg writing as I've ever heard. Great teacher. Very accessible. Very talented. Beautiful writing. I'd like to take another of Marc's courses.  Tim Wiegand

I think Marc is an excellent teacher. [He] always provided prompt and pointed feedback. The swiftness of his replies encouraged many students to revise and improve their work. I found the content, lessons, and assignments most satisfactory. By the end of the course, I felt equipped to continue writing in a variety of genres and styles. I would certainly recommend Marc's courses to a friend or peer. Angela Eward-Mangione 

It was a very well crafted course with great do-able assignments. I loved the angle and felt stimulated and enriched by the lectures. [Marc]was astute and responsive. I was very happy with the teaching. I have already recommended your classes to friends. Maren Bodenstein