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Pronoun Pointers

A pronoun refers back to a noun or takes the place of that noun. The correct pronoun must be used so the reader understands which noun the pronoun is referring to or replacing.

Pronouns must agree in number:
Singular pronouns taking the place of singular nouns.

Correct: If a dancer expects to be a star, she has to practice.
Incorrect: If a dancer expects to be a star, they have to practice.

Everybody, anybody, anyone, each, neither, nobody, someone, a person, etc. are singular and take singular pronouns.

Correct: Everybody must know his basics.
Incorrect: Everybody must know their basics.

Pronouns must agree in person:
When writing in the "first person" (I), don't switch to the "second" (you) or "third person" (he, she, they, it, etc.). Using the "second person," don't switch to "first" or "third"; in "third person don't switch to "first" or "second."

Correct: When a dancer goes to an audition, he should be prepared.
Incorrect: When a dancer goes to an audition, you should be prepared.

Pronouns must refer clearly to a specific noun.

Although the sandbag hit the stage, it was not damaged. (Is "it" thesandbag or the stage?)
I don't feel they should have continued the audition. (Who are "they"?)
The end is drawing nigh, which is a relief. (What is a relief, the end or that it is drawing nigh?)
Tiffany worked there last year. This may be her last time. (What word does "this" refer to?)
If you jot all the steps down on paper, you can refer to it later. (What does "it" refer to the steps or the paper?)

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